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19-03-10, 12:07 PM
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Wedding results!

Well here are just 2 pics so far, the Bride and Groom have seen these too.
What do you think?
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19-03-10, 01:41 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

Nice stuff Eileen - I like the second one best (not so keen on the brick wall in the first one )
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19-03-10, 02:48 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

What a gorgeous dress.
I wonder if you can make that brick less distractng. I would also adjust the skin tones in the second one. The groom especially is looking rather pink.
Overall good job though, I bet they are thrilled with them.
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19-03-10, 03:01 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

I agree with both of the above - lovely work Eileen - if you could desaturate that brick a bit, the first would be excellent
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19-03-10, 03:46 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

I really like the first one too, maybe desaturate the wall a little. Both lovely shots Eileen XXX

But, very well done, bet you are glad it's all over


     
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19-03-10, 06:51 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

Thanks everyone! yes I'm glad its over, I will try what you all have suggested and will let you know how I get on! Thanks again xx
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20-03-10, 11:13 AM
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Re: Wedding results!

I agree with all of the above! desaturate the wall and address the skin tones! good job Eileen!
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21-03-10, 03:56 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

Hello again, well I worked on the image now, what do you think now?
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21-03-10, 04:25 PM
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Re: Wedding results!

I think somewhere in between would be better - but then personally I'm not a fan of selective colouring.
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22-03-10, 09:38 AM
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Re: Wedding results!

what is that distortion around the mans rear in the first and altered picture. looks as if some editing is showing up.

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