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14-06-09, 08:29 AM
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One misty moisty morning

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14-06-09, 01:04 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

I really like this photo and the mood conveyed. Everything seems so soft, so vulnerable, so temporary. I would have cloned out the wet spot in the field foreground. The position of the sun sort of overpowers the composition, demanding too much attention. I don't really have a solution of how to deal with this. Again, the shot is good so I don't mean to be overly picky.
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14-06-09, 01:09 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

Here is a shot taken with less sun, by dint of me turning about 8 degrees anticlockwise after I took the first. To me this has less impact. Your thoughts would be appreciated.



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14-06-09, 01:47 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

The last photo has the most potential. There's a technique I use for adding the rays of the sun in a very controlled manner that would enhance this final photo. If you wouldn't mind sending a private message with your e-mail address I'll send you a video lesson on the process. It's good that you took more than one photograph and that you varied your angles.
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14-06-09, 02:10 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

These are really nice Gaz only critique is the top of the tree is chopped off!
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14-06-09, 08:29 PM
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Really nice Gaz


     
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14-06-09, 08:36 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

I love the way the sun catches the mist
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15-06-09, 08:28 AM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

I like the last one, You can smell how fresh the morning was!
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15-06-09, 07:30 PM
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Re: One misty moisty morning

i really like the sun and the mist together in the first image
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