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29-09-08, 05:37 PM
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Re: Danielle

Sorry but it doesnt say 'Seduction' to me. I'm half expecting blood to trickle from the side of her mouth.

Nevertheless, the idea is a good one, composition could be improved to show off such a pretty (and hopefully very much alive) young lady much better. Nice lighting, but a busy background.

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29-09-08, 05:39 PM
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I'm not sure what you are after with the shot, but for me it looks like she is dead. In that I mean the fact there is no connection with the camera and the dark eyes, also the position of the arm and body and the muted tones it makes her look like a corpse.

Sorry if this offends, but just my opinion so feel free to ignore me
You are braver than I, thought she looked more dead than excited, but there are always as many opinions as people.
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29-09-08, 06:42 PM
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Okay , Dan, you know I love your stuff and think Danielle is gorgeous but these guys are braver than me, because when I saw it I thought she looked lifeless

There is no connection with the camera, no invitation with the eyes, sorry Dan, just being honest xxx


     
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29-09-08, 07:39 PM
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Re: Danielle

I love the feedback I can see where everyone is coming from. One problem now is that I'm back at Uni and so is she, 200 miles away.

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29-09-08, 08:07 PM
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Never mind Dan, Christmas is only 11 or so weeks away.
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29-09-08, 08:11 PM
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I love the feedback I can see where everyone is coming from. One problem now is that I'm back at Uni and so is she, 200 miles away.

Damn!
Aw ,bless. See it will give you something to do when you meet! You can take pictures

I'm glad we didn't offend you xx


     
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30-09-08, 12:51 PM
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Re: Danielle

Heres another one!


she doesnt look dead in this one? lol
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30-09-08, 01:06 PM
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No, this one looks wistful. the light is nice and as usual the model is lovely the only thing that grates for me is her hand, it look very large in comparison and because she is playing with her hair a little bit science fiction. You have not tagged so I don't know what lens you used but would guess it may have been a wide angle.
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30-09-08, 01:20 PM
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it was my fixed 50mm lens, maybe I could counteract it by darkening it a bit.
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30-09-08, 01:25 PM
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That surprises me, thought the large appearance of her hand may have been the lens but I would think a 50mm would have been ok, don't know sorry have to wait for one of the proper photographers to give you their opinion I can only give my gut feelings.
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