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18-06-08, 11:08 AM
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Abby

This was Abby's 1st photoshoot, and only my second of this type.

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18-06-08, 12:07 PM
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Re: Abby

Love those. Trying to persuade my sis to pose for a photoshoot but she wont. Who did the makeup?
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18-06-08, 12:16 PM
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She done it herself.
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18-06-08, 12:17 PM
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Like these, really like no3


     
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18-06-08, 02:54 PM
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1 and 5 stand out most for me Sarge

2 is too over exposed imo :-/
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18-06-08, 04:00 PM
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What about this one?

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18-06-08, 04:22 PM
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Really like No. 5.
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18-06-08, 06:55 PM
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I like No's 1 & 3.

No 2 would have been the pick of the bunch (IMO) as it is framed beautifully, but it's obviously way over exposed. I assume this was the look you were going for, but it's not really working...again imo
I also think shot 4 is too contrasty ( if that's even a word??? ) I think the shot might have worked better had her make-up been a little more subtle.
Shot 5 is a nice photograph, but I think her face needs a little bounce light thrown in there, as it is slightly overpowered by her feet, hands and right sleeve. I think her face should be the most important part of the shot, as that's where the eye is usually drawn to first.

For me, shot 3 is the pick of the bunch
but it would have been No 2 had the exposure levels been different.

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What about this one?


I feel this shot is too strong....and too tight, and the make-up a tad over powering for a shot this close up, considering she is only smiling for the camera. If she was pulling a zany face or something, I think it would work a bit better, but for me at least...it needs to tone down a wee bit


     
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18-06-08, 06:59 PM
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Thanks for the comments.

I've purposefully over exposed a lot of the shots as I think her frame and face shape suits it.
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18-06-08, 09:18 PM
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I think part of the reason is the pics are quite big/tall, meaning most people need to scroll to see it - it'd actually look slightly different say, 50% of the size eg:



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