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08-12-09, 03:44 PM
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Santas little helper! lol

took this for a friend to put on a Christmas card! as always tell me what you think! what I should change, what works! that sort of stuff! thanks for looking guys
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08-12-09, 05:36 PM
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Re: Santas little helper! lol

Nice shot FB - the one thing I'd prob have done different is just have the one toy as the others are a little distracting.
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08-12-09, 06:15 PM
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Re: Santas little helper! lol

I think it would crop it a little closer then try and clone out winnie the pooh.
Or fill that top space with 'Merry Christmas 2009'.

I would also try giving it a bit more pop / contrast.
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09-12-09, 02:34 AM
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Re: Santas little helper! lol

Agree with all the above, and also, I think the blown whites dazzle the eyes a little. On the whole though, it's got a lot of potential, and you've captured a gorgeous expression there!

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