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04-07-08, 03:03 PM
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04-07-08, 03:17 PM
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Re: Jasmine

I'm not really qualified to critique so I hope you don't mind me doing this, but I just did a little edit just to show what I'd change if I were to paint it! I really like it, but I've rotated it slightly, just to give a little bit more of a diagonal (that's why I had to crop it!) as it seemed to sit a little flat before. Also, just adjusted the levels slightly to bring out a little more colour in the background and the centres of the flowers.

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04-07-08, 03:20 PM
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Re: Jasmine

Charlotte thank you

I took a few, and something just wasn't right about them

Much better thanks xx


     
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04-07-08, 03:23 PM
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Re: Jasmine

Thanks Moonstone.. glad you don't mind!
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04-07-08, 04:30 PM
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Re: Jasmine

Really nice MS - only thing I can think of is the light bit in the far left is a little distracting.. nothing a bit of pp couldn't sort out tho
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04-07-08, 05:31 PM
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Re: Jasmine

Is this any better??



     
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04-07-08, 05:37 PM
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Re: Jasmine

Yep, but I would have left the crop as it was, a bit too tight now (imo)
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